On my main account i am writing a book called 'Its Hard Fitting in' That book will now be on this account!! Thanks for reading! And look forward to the next chapter!!! :)

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" As my friend Haily and I got of the bus to go home. We saw a new boy next my home. As Haily and I were walking to him, Haily's mom pulled over next to us and took Haily to her home. Now I was neverous, almost about to scream because there was only one to face wich was me. I put my back pack on my shoulder and walked liked I was............ lost. He himself chased after me. I turned around and looked at him in to his dark dark dark brown eyes. He said is there a problem. I said really!!! I mean I trying to get to my house and your here like like.. (he stopped me) What!I screamed. He said:There.... what I asked. There is a wolf. He answerd. I ran in the dirt like a freak right were the wolf was. I tripped on a sort of rake. The wolf came after me and bit my leg "AHHHHHHH" I screamed. The boy came and really jumped on the wolf and punched him in the face. The wolf ran into the woods and never came back since. The boy picked me up. He carried me to his drive way and laid me down there. He said: Are you crazy? I answerd: Are you getting used to that? I tried to impress you I guess. By getting your self injured by a wolf! He screamed I asked him what his name was. He said it was Alek. He asked mine. I told him mine. Lianna. I got up from the drive way and walked back to him. "Thanks...Thanks alot for............ He stopped me and said: Wow! He grabbed me by my stomache and pulled me closer to him, grabbed my face and well kissed me.  After that I started crying. Alek picked me up and walked me to my house. "How do you know were I live?" I asked "I know every thing." By that time we were to my house. So he let me go and I went inside. The next day I was waiting to go on the bus. I saw Alek. I ran as fast as I could to him. "Do you go to my school?" He said he was home schooled. But........ I said. "Your bus." He said. I turned around and saw my friend Haily getting on the bus. I turned around to say good bye to Alek. But I couldn't find him. I ran to the bus and sat next to Haily. "So..... I saw that dude." She Said. " Who?' I asked "Don't play dumb with me Lianna who is that guy you were with?" She asked. "Oh thats thats tha......" "Hurry up!" Haily shouted. "His name is Alek." I answerd.  "So are you guys a thing?" She demanded. "Maybe. I don't know but he saved me! There was a wolf in that old bushy area by my house and like a freak I ran to it! I got bit on my left leg. And he like jumped on the wolf and punched him. Well  then later we ummmmm ummm." "What!" She asked. " Well...... kissed. "So you guys are a thing! How sweet! Congradulations! Oh I am sooo happy for you this is like a little love thing going on! Oooo maybe on tonight when I sleep over I can meet Alek!!" Yah, sure I mean ok!" I said. So school ended we rased home together.  We saw a note on my front door. So I ran and read it. This is the exact words it read: Good bye Lianna I love you. I started crying I knew who it was from... Alek. I ran with out Haily knowing what happened to Alek's home. There was a wolf in Alek's yard. I screamed. I  kicked the gate to his back yard down and went inside his home. ALEK!!!!!!!!! I screamed the house was empty. I went to the front of the house and the window was broken. I went and found Haily. She was outside screaming words at me. I did not pay attention 1 bit. " Were is Alek!" She screamed. I new it the wolf he  was killed be the wolf. But still it puzzles me. Why was there a note before he died at my home, and why is there nothing in his home. We really only knew each other for a day but were deeply in love. So I told Haily Alek was killed and showed her the note. She cried with me and hugged me. We went to my house and cried, cried, cried, and screamed. I still ask myself "Why, why is love painful." I have no answer or clue to this . But I feel loved by him, he saved my life. This is true and happened last week on wednesday. I wanna die in his pain. Haily told me she doesn't wanna find love because it's to painful to handle.

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This is the first time I've written a story so plzz read and send in your comments!!! I'll only have the introduction posted for now. If you like tragic love stories then you should read, now plzz enjoy!!!

Tonight I Amile C. Snicket will recive the best late birthday present ever. Or so that's what I've been told by  Jauques De l'adieu. Jauques has been living here for a year now with his new foster parents. I couldn't invite him because he's middle class and I'm high class. I realy like Jauques but I don't know if he likes me. We are standing under a tree in his backyard. He told me to close my eyes and I did. I tried my hardest to focus on the moment and forget that he'd be going to a new foster home in a few minutes. I could feel him leaning in. I've been waiting for this moment since the day I met him. To Be Continued

I hoped you liked the beginning and I'll be publishing more this comming weekend.

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I hope you like it!!!!!!!!!!!

This is my poem,

as simple as that,

Nothing to hard,

might be to easy,

I seriously don't know what to write,

so I put whatever pops,

This is my poem,

as simple as that,

all I want is a smile. :)

My first poem.Give me feedback. thx.

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  The next day I was really tired. For some strange reason and my body was pale I got up to look in the mirror something was wrong with my face it was pink. And my lips were purple I realised my air was on -21. How was it so low i quickly turned it up. and as i looked towards my window. i saw someone run past it. i was scared but i didnt tell my parents becuz when i remembered it it looked like luke...

 

 

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Those days a waste,
Perfect and flawless
What moments I haven't lived in,
Those moments never to be touched again.

What others see is felt within the heart,
I can't sit here inside of my own mind
I can't stand here and watch time fly by
Those days perfect and flawless.

Time only goes one way,
So regret will come and fill the edges
Naive to the moments that could touch the heart
And possibly feed and renew the soul.

Those days a waste,
What have I done?
Now that I'm awake,
They were perfect and flawless.

I can't sit here inside of my own mind
My heart only beating with the time
Waiting to be awaken to the life
I can't hide away from what was once mine.

Open my eyes and the blood will flow
Through my veins as the time slows
I can't sit here inside of my own mind
Those days a waste...

Perfect and flawless.

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I walked into my little brother Kevin's best friend Danny's house. My mom was so excited to go with both of us because obviously,Danny had an older sister,2 grades up from me and she thought we might become friends,because I really only had one friend..Alex. He was a guy. And somewhat of Maha,who was a grade younger than me,but I really never got to see her. Suddenly,Danny's mom greeted us,with her daughter Carlie and her friend I was guessing. "Hi,Michelle and Sean!!" she said. Umm,still in the room?? Michelle was my mom. "Oh,and you must be Ashley!! Hi!!" she smiled.    "Hi," I said.    "This is Carlie,and her friend Marissa," Danny's mom said to me. Danny and Kevin ran off to play. Oh crap. I just noticed something. Marissa..I hung out with her in the 4th grade. She was a backstabbing,behind-the-back talker,and the pushiest girl you'd ever meet.    "Hi Michelle," Melissa said to my mom.   "Hi! How's Dana doing?" my mom said to Marissa. I was guessing that was Marissa's mom. Me,Carlie,Marissa,My mom,and Danny's mom sat down and talked for a while. We started talking about clubs in school. "I'm in Chorus," Melissa said.    "So are you,right Ash?" my mom nudged to me. Uggh. It was true. But I hated Chorus ever since I didn't get a solo and embarressed myself.    "Are you in Omni?" Marissa asked me. Omni was for SMART people in the 6th and 7th grade. They were in 9th grade.    "No," I replied.    "What's Omni?" my mom asked.    "It's for smart people," I replied,sounding dull.    "I was in all the Omni's for all subjects," Marissa told me.    "I was in one subject of Omni," Carlie added. Great. I was surrounded by 14 year old smart,pretty,boy crazy girls.    "Are you in running club?" asked Marissa.    "No. I have stupid Excel that day," I told her. And Excel was for dumb people. At least I was only in one subject for that.    "Well,I gotta go," Marissa said. "Bye!". Carlie went up to her bedroom.    "Why don't you go up with her?" asked My mom and Danny's mom. Uhh. I was 13. She was like,15. No way Jose. 15 year olds don't want to be friends with 13 year olds. I decided to go in Danny's room,where both Kevin and Danny were in. But,I walked out because it smelt really bad..I layed down on the rug upstaires. We were at Danny's for about 4 hours now. All I wanted to do was go home. Eventually,we did. The next day I woke up..

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        &n bsp;      Hello fellow writers! If you like writing this contest IS for you. IF YOU WIN YOU GET 4 GIFTS, A BLOG ABOUT YOUSELF, AND I'LL USE YOU YOUR NAME, YOUR FRIENDS NAME, OR A NAME YOU MADE YOU MADE UP IN MY NEW STORY SUPERNATURAL BECOMES NATURAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! All you have to do is backata me with a short story that shows YOUR TRUE PERSONALITY. No help. You have until  March 20th.

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Chapter 4: Evil sisters always get in the way.

"Have you girls ever met my sister?" "Noooo." we all said together. "Well I'll get her, you girls stay here." "Sakura don't mess anything up. Somehow you always mess with people and make them hate you!" I said. "Oh come on I have lots of........ um I need to make some calls to varify that." "Isn't she the best." I said sarcastcicly. "The coolest." the twins said sarcasticly too. "I here footsteps." Rinji said. Right at that moment Sakura came rushing in. " Everyone hates me!" she screamed. "Oh come on I was just sc..." She jumep at me and grabed me by the arms and said, "Even my mom said so is that enough proof." But then she started cracking up. "Whaaat" I demanded "I thoudght you said everyone hated you!" I screamed. "You *laugh* should *laugh* have *laugh* seen *laugh* your *laugh* faces *laugh*! she said trying not to laugh. "What arghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!" I slamed hard into her and she fell on the floor with a loud umphhhh. "I was lying," she screamed, "It was a joke gosh you always have to turn everything into a battlefeild gosh." "Shh it's actually them this time." the twins whisperd. I helped Ryoko to her feet. Right at that moment another beautiful person walked into the room. "Omigosh!" Ryoko said in her valley girl annoying voice." The gothic princess bar is in the next town."Shut up!" I heard a light voice say. It came from the beautiful girl.

"Excuse me." Ryoko said. "Ichiro I can't beleive you chose a girl that can't hear. That's sad." "Of course you did." Ichiro said. "Well this is my sister Aimi." "Hi Aimi." I said. "Hi see she is a proper girl you should marry." she said. I blushed at the compliment. "Oh that's your sister I made a big mistake." Sakura said. "Ya um you did so Ichiro don't marry her." Aimi said. "Oh so I assume your married judging by that 1.) You can make comments on other peoples relationships and 2.) You look I don't 50 or 60 years old." "Oh no." I wispered. I said that because I saw Aimi run across the run and slam into Ryoko so hard you could her how hard she hit her. "Ohhhhh I made a huge mistake." and Sakura fainted.

The next day she was happy and perkey as usual. But Sakura should be soooo glad that the knock out was temporary because we had to prove are wortheness to be her. Of course this challeng was made by Aimi.  "Get a gift for Ichiro. Whoevers was the best would win. And get a better chance of staying. No one is being eleminated because it is NOT like the bacholer. Does everyone understand?" Aimi said. "Yes we do!" Well what are you waiting for go go GO!!!!!!"

A few hours later we all got back to the castle. "Dear Rinji please present your gift." "Here it is." She walked to her car and got out the cutest little puppy ever. "Awwwww!" everyone said. "Ryoko please present your gift." "Ok." She went around the side of the castle and came out with the shinest red Volvo I've ever seen." "Sakura please present yours." "Ok I will." She got out a beautiful rose bouqet. "I didn't know what kind of flowers you liked so I got roses." "Now Miki present yours." "Well I'm not rich so I'll give you mine." I gave what I could a hug and a 'man' necklace. This is the best gift he said. His sister said,"And Sakura's was the worst."  "See what I mean," Sakura whispered, "Evil sisters always get in the way!"

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      & nbsp;  This is why CRUSHES R A SECRET!

      &nbs p;                 &n bsp;    Chapter 1: He alredy knows!

   My friend's Donna, Clare, Sophie, Ed, Eddor dooble d, Eddie and I were walkin 2 school on summer morning, Eddie as always blurded out in dead silents "Lets make some money today 4 candy" He always has a sweet tooth, not just for candy, but money to, "No" said all of us exsept Eddie which looked at us as if we were walls that he could bump into, and a blank expresion in his voice sain, "o, common' we wlays wanted to do that"  Eddie said that as if we were the new kids in an old ally,  "No," i sad, "you always wanted to do that."  

Kyle which was a guy in my Math class walked by,  "here is you chance marshelle, go talk to him" Said Sophie as if she was talkin to a stuffed animal.   I walked up to him, he just stared into my eyes, I stared in his as if I we walkin on air, i came to him, "Hey, umm.....Marshelle right?" Said Kyle, as if he didnt know what my name is, i said "yes, thats right, and u r Kyle sretho payne the second right?" i asked him that as if i didnt already know,  "Yepp, u r right, anyway, I just want to know, umm...Will u do me a favor?" he asked as if he thought i would say no, i said "yea wat is it?" he looked at me and yelled out in a whisper noise, "will you go out with me?" he looked at me and smilled, "umm..sure, yea" We exchanged #'s

The next day, he txted me, it was Saterday, "he umm...thank u for ur #. o and someone told me u liked me." i blushed, "Who told u?" i was worried they told him wat i told them about how i feel when i'm around Kyle, he txted me back in BIG letters "DOBBLE D TOLD ME"......

YOU WANNA KNOW MORE?   Wait 4 the next chapter!  BYE $ NOW!      &nb sp;         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;        & nbsp;      MAR$HELLE

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The whole time we were in homeroom i couldntstop thinking about Caden. I tried to tell my self that we were just friends . But, it didnt work. As me Rosalie and Caden were about to meet up by our lockers my palms starting sweating and i felt sick. When we finnally were all there Caden said to me:" r u ok???" All i did was nod my head and try to smile. I knew i couldnt talk , i thought i might throwup. When the bell rang me and Rosalie went to Mrs. Kinlands Math class, Caden went in the other direction . Thank God"i let out wit a sigh. Rosalie looked at me quizzickly, but i ignored her. When we were mayb half way through class i  passed Rosalie a note, it said : Meet me at my house, after  skool kay??.She wrote back: I have an art class and ill meet u after then but why?? I stared at her and then wrote: Its a 911 emergincy u need to help me!!!!!. She gave me a look that said whatever it is it must b important, ill b there. And Boy, waz she rite!! 

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*Again, so sorry about Liar! The preface for Opposite is on my previous blog!!!*

I held up the birthday rose to the light, examining its plainness. A regular, pink, rose. Like the ones mom used to grow in her garden. Before the accident.
    "Kat, come down. We're all waiting for you." Sam yelled from downstairs.
    I sighed, I was supposed to be putting this in water.
    "One minuet, Sam!" I yelled, and grabbed a glass off of the bathroom counter, filled it up, and dropped the rose in.
    I looked into it, curious. I held my hand over the top and waved it slightly, a wave of water splashed out of the cup and onto the floor. I sighed and set the glass on the counter. Then walked out the door.
    "We have some news for you, Katara." My grandmother's weak voice came from the living room.
    I walked in and sat down next to her on the couch "What is it?"
    "Your brother has been accepted into a collage- in California.
    "Hes moving out! Yes!" I screamed, he glared at me.
    She sighed and continued "But, due to the fact that your father has sent a letter telling me he has signed me up to go to a nursing home-" I didn't let her finish.
    "I get the house to myself!" this couldn't get better.
    "You have to go and live with him in his new apartment." she said quickly, it could have only gotten worse.



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Book:P.S. Longer Letter Later

Author:Paula Danziger and Ann M. Martin

Genre:Realistic Fiction

The novelconsists solely of letters and spans the course of seventh grade, a difficult time for both Tara and Elizabeth, particularly because they are apart from each other and can rarely communicate by telephone. Tara has moved to Ohio and is adjusting to life in a new school. Elizabeth is adjusting to life in her old school without Tara to help her through the aches and pains of her newly tumultuous home life. Elizabeth's dad is laid off and although the family is very wealthy, they never saved any of their $$ so they have almost no $$. Plus, Elizabeth's dad never wants people to think that their family is not rich. so he charges all kinds of expensive stuff on credit cards. This book was really cool because it was written by two people, and the authors wrote this book by sending each other the letters and neither knew what was going to happen next!!

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Hey, it's bubble567! I'm having a funny story contest along with my Pic Contest. The deadline is the same date: March 20th, 2010. All you have to do is write a backatcha for this blog saying a short funny story. I will annouce the winner on a blog called HaHa Contest Winner.1st place will get 5 gifts, 2nd place will get 3 gifts and 3rd place will get 1 gift.

Send the stories in by March 20, 2010.

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       Today I'm going to school walking because my car broke down. As I walk out I see my neihbor's  daughter walking out of her house. She walkes up to me and says," Hi you look new want me to show you where the school is because your going the wrong direction." she giggles. I start giggling too and I said," Thanks that'll be great!"We walked and talked to school. I new that we would be friends.

     When we got to school she asked," What class are you in?" I said,"I'm in History first." She sighed and said ," Oh, I have Science first. Then again everyone has History first." She smiled and said," Well the bell will ring soon. Bye."

       During History we reviewed the Important names of  the World War 11. In writing we wrote a poem about what a friend was,

         ;        & nbsp;      &nb sp;         ;        friends are nice

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;       just like rice

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;        they laugh at your stupid jokes

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;     they play with you forever and always

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;  a friend is a friend who is there when you need help

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;    though a best friend laughs when you fall

         ;        & nbsp;       &nb sp;         ;  you laugh too

         ;    a best friend is a best friend who dosent help you when you fall

         ;         -Kristy

   Who cares about the rest of the classes. he he. i dont wanna write about it.  The friend, Peneloppe, walked with me back home. She is a friend.

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My parents had 5 children 2 boys and 3 girls, ranging from the ages 10-19. I was the middle child ( Of course i was spoiled) My brothers were handsome young men and my sister were really beautiful. My older sister Sapphrine( we call her Sapp for short) had guys to there knees, begging for her hand in marrige and my other sister (who was 13) had boys crying for her also. I had that too but I didnt pay attetion to them I was in love with the Prince of Blackwill (also my friend too) He was handsome. He was tall, tan, light brown eyes and his name was Lawrence. My sister Sapphrine was killed in a "accident". My parents were depressed for a while my brothers got married and my sister killed herself because she couldnt held the pain of my sister absents. I was alone with my parents (OHHH I FORGOT I am a heiress)

My death

It was my best friend Lucinda's birthday ( a heiress too) we met at the Blackwill school for girls when we were 8 and we been best friend every since she was finally turning 18. I was already for her party with my red long dress ( my favorite dress), red slappers, rose color blush, rose color lipstick, a red rose for my hair( which was a bun). I went downstairs to show my parents who were in the living room by the fireplace my mom was petting our golden retriever Sally we got her after my younger sister Sophia died. " you look beautiful, Bella!" my mom walked over to me and held my hand, "MY DAUGHTER LOOKS JUST LIKE HER MOTHER!!!" said my father with his pipe in his mouth "Thank you!" i said. My servant Steven ( who was like a buddy to me since I was a baby) agreed with my parents "You are sure beautiful Bella!" he said. Even though he was 80 years old and his eyes were geting weak he still can see beauty in the eye of the beholder!!!! I walked outside where my carriage was, I got into it and wave to my parents who were stearing at the door waveing, my mom put her hand to her heart, she cried with tears of joy that her baby was all grown up. The driver close the door and he start riding off and i look through the window and wave again to my parents and that was the last time i will see my parents because what happen after 40 min when we pulled away from the house was my last moment of life

A strange place

I was laying there on the ground, montionless, just laying there and the all of a sudden i woke up but it was in a strange place, there was no buildings, just white alround, no people laughing, no kids playing, no carriages, no markets NOTHING!!! I got up quick and begain to look around and shouted on the top of my lungs "HELLO!!!!!!!""IS ANYONE HERE?!?!?!??!? HELLO!!!!" i was sick to my stomach, what about my parents knowing the last child alive is dead  now!!! what about my best friend's birthday party I missed, what about Lawerence  and what about him, he was marrying his fiance "Crystal!!" ugh i hated her she was evil to me but lovely to the others but she hated me. I looked around again and i yell with tears coming out of my eye "MY NAME IS BELLA SMITH CAN SOMEONE TELL ME WHERE AM I!!!",  I was saying a little prayer "my lord help me know where the heck I am, please!!! AMEN". I look into my coat pocket and felt something, it was something in there!!! I pulled out 4 picture( 2 of my parents, 1 of my sisters amd brothers, and one with Lawrence and I when we were younger!) I look at them and smiled, I remember when we took the picture it was when we where going to his royal ball at age sixteen!! Him and I where in love but he could not marry me because Heiress and royal families could not marry) when I was in my train of thought I hear someone calling my name "BELL BELLE BELL BELLE!!!" someone repeated over and  over again that what my parents called me when I was younger "BELL BELLE BELL BELLE!!" the voice said. I recongize the voice I turned around and stood face to face with a girl who look just like me, with a blue dress, her hair down and curly but she was 2 inches taller then me "Bella, it me your sister!!" and it was Sapphire!!!

 

Look out for chapter two you guys "my love i am watchin"

love you guys!!! PLEASE COMMENT AND READ IT AND give me some suggesting and i will add you guys to the story just put your really name!!!

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I was still on the ground crying. "Dont worry. We will stay wit u as long as it takes!" Maria said stareing at the grop... I got happy "Lets throw a party!" I screamed with joy. "OK ill get the "Fruit Punch" lol!" John said. "Great?" I said

Every1 was at school still. We were outside of school. "PARTY AT MY HOUSE AT 7!" I screamed "YEA!!!" every1 screamed. "Bring a swimsuit!" I screamed

I got dressed in my black dress with my purple high heels.

The party started. Every1 was screaming and running. Jumping in the pool. Every emo boy was talking 2 me. Zakk was lookin at me when I was flirting with them. And all the emo girls were talking 2 Zakk. But he pushed away.

Zakk asked John something.

Zakk pushed threw the boys who were talkin 2 me. He grabed my hand. And took my in front of the pool. It was the deep end 16 feet. He got on 1 knee "Anissa, Will you marry me?!" Zakk asked. Every1 gasped. I gasped. My eyes shut as I collapsed in the pool....

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When I think of you, All my dreams come true When I see your face, I'm lost without a traceWhen hear your name, I feel like I've got fame!! Your the one that makes me, me, And that is who I want to be,So when you see the girl next door, I'll be sitting on the floorYou won't notice me until I show you who I'll be if you leave me.So don't leave me, I think you'll see, the person I will be if you leave me!

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Book: The Breadwinner

Author: Deborah Ellis

Genre: Historical Fiction

 

An 11-year-old girl named Parvana is living in a one-room apartment with her family that consists of her father, mother called Fatana, older sister Nooria, younger sister Maryam, and baby brother Ali in Kabul, Afghanistan. She once had an older brother named Hossain but he was killed when he stepped on a land mine. Her father is the only one that can work but has a very hard time doing so due to a leg injury and severe cough. Parvana accompanies her father while he works in the Marketplace each day, reading and writing letters in Pashtu and Dari. (He and her mother were both educated in England ). The Taliban comes to Parvana's home one day and takes her father away because he went to university in England. Parvana gets food and then a Taliban sees her and she outruns him. Parvana is forced to cut her hair and dress as a boy because women were not allowed to work during this time. She becomes the family's breadwinner, wearing Hossain's clothes.

Parvana soon runs into a girl that she used to go to school with named Shauzia who has been put through the same experience. They start to work together and soon become friends. They were never that close in school but they are now trying to figure out ways to earn more money. She also meets a family friend named Mrs. Weera, a former physical education teacher who comes to stay with Parvana's family and takes charge in their household due to Parvana's mother being severely depressed over the loss of her husband. With the help of her friend, Parvana's mother begins to feel better and eventually teams up with her and a group of other women to write the Afghanistan National Magazine, smuggling it to and from Pakistan to be published. Throughout the book Parvana grows closer to her older sister and becomes more responsible and stronger emotionally as a person. She also becomes very close with the figure of a woman in the window of a building behind where Parvana normally works (who throws small gifts onto her blanket while she is there). This is a very great and also realistic book and it taught me a lot about the Taliban and life in Kabul.

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Chapter 3: Are Secrets

"All of us have secrets here don't we?" Iricho said. "I have one my self but you must tell me yours before I tell you mine." "Who wants to go first." "I will Ichiro." Sakura said quietly. "Here is my secret."

"One day I was susposed to go out with my boy friend. I had so much crushes and everyone had crushes on me or else the were envious of me. So that day we were going to the amusement park. It was a lovely day. We went on rides asnd held hands everyone said we were the perfect couple and we were. I belevied so but I don't think he did. So a week from that wonderfuly made day he told me to come to his house of course I said yes. Why wouldn't I? So when I got there we watched movied and talked. Soon he gave me a kiss. I loved so much I didn't care that it hurt. Yes the kiss was on my neck. But soon it stung. I yelled at him and asked what happened. It wasn't like the vampire bite in movies, it was warm and pleasnt but then it felt like icy shards sheering through my body. So that kept happining the tingly warm feeling and the dagger like ice. He kept telling me that it wasn't a bite but a kiss. I belived him cause it was a kiss i felt his lips. But it was so painful. My love for him was so strong I still didn't care. But he said that his family was different. He said that a paiful kiss ment goodbye. What I said no! I was shocked. I ran out of his house. I cant  he left me. I ran to the park I lived near and sat at the brick wall. I saw the faint glow of headlights. Then a person walked out he was handsome and around my age. He told me he had a lovely home and thought I was homeless so I followed him to his car. Lovely he told me and gave me a long kiss. All my pain went away and I surged with happiness. I live with him for about 2 years and I left! That was my secret.

"Ok so who is next to tell there secret!" Ichiro said. "We will." Ryoko and Rinji said

"We used to be maids. Yes the house was grand and lovely but Herchio, the man who hired us,   was mean and abuseve but sometimes loving. One night Rinji, in her black and white uniform, walked into Herchio's room and he was taking a bath. He was taking off his shirt when she walked in the room . And when he saw her he slapped her. She started crying and tried to run out of the room but Herchio grabbed her by her hair and the door locks from the outside so when I heard her scream I couldn't get the door open. He pushed her in the bathtub which was pretty deep. She tried to get out but he held her down she was crying and he knew it. Soon he let go and she popped up coughing and sputtering. But he didn't let her out he got in with her yes his pants were on but yeah his shirt was off. EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEK she screamed. Shhh he calmed her and gave her a kiss. No no no. He said that his love was strong for her. He actually fell so much in love that he held her tightly to him and gave her kisses and said she was beautiful and amazing and that she was better then me Ryoko. She accepted that and thought it was true. Ok ok Ryoko you told enough about my secret know I will tell yours. So one day ryoko was scrubbing floors for Herchio. Well when he walked into the room she was envious because yes he was in love with me so she flung her self on him pretending that she slipped and kissed him. Well he didn't like that at all because yes he was in love with me. So he slapped her so hard she  cried really hard. So then at night she woke me and we ran away. That was are secret.

"Miki its your turn for your secret." "Yes ok." I said

"Well one night me and my mom were huddling in a corner. We belived are house was haunted. We even knew that it was hautned. We heard heavy footsteps and a growling voice. We thought it was over because the voice stpped but just as we were about to stand up and leave the corner the lights went out and we saw a tall scary looking man that was glowing white. He walked torwads my mom and picked her up off the ground.She turned glowind white two. Me and my mom used wite magic so you could call us mages but anyway back to what happened We were wearning are beautiful white mage out fits but when the man picked her up I couldnt see what was happinig but I did see he dress being covered in blood. Red dark blood went everywhere and then the lights came on and I saw my mom lying on the ground bleeding. I called the hospital but they said that happened to many people so there hospital was full. That is my secret.

"Wow my secret might not be as painful as yours but here it is. My family used to be dirt poor. Yes we all have are secrets." Ichiro said.

 

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Hey everyone! Here are the rules for round 1 of my contest, Queen Writing!!!

For round 1, please write a poem, song, or a paragraph long story describing who you are as a writer.

I need 10 girls for this round, then I'll narrow it down to 5, then 3, then 2.

Then I will choose the winner!!!!!!!

You have by tommorow.

Love ya,

Clairexx

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To enter:

Make up your own book summary that would make someone want you to write the book. Here's my example:

One summer changed 11 year old Lillian's life forever for the worse. Will she ever get over the loss? A story of faith and hope.

 

Round ends tommorow!!!

 

xoxoNIKKIxoxo

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 Guess what?! I'm writing a book! I started a book last year, but gave up on it, but i'm gonna connect them all. My book is called "Demons." I'll publish it on the website i'm making and tell you guys when to go on. Gtg, byez!
        &n bsp;       &nbs p;       ~ Love, Yesi 3.13.10


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its a 2 people poem

(PERSON 1)
its a bright new day
you are part of everything
todays the day
open up your eyes

look around
wont you come out to play
greet a brand new way

the sky is blue
the sun said hi
its amazing
dont say bye

look around
cant you see
its beautiful
and so are you

do what you want
your conected
in a way
its your day

(PERSON 2)
im crying
this aint my day
have you ever met yourself

i aint got luck
i might give up
iv been so bad
dont you see

sitting at the feild
waiting for my sun to come
if it dosent come
im done

(PERSON 1 AND 2 AT THE SAME TIME)
iv given up
your no use
cant get you to leave

you in my mind
i cant say good bye
have you ever read a story
sad, like you

but
i guess
your worth it





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i decided to cancel my book club because i only had 3 members: me, my real life bff and one of my blog buddies. im sure nobody will miss it! anyway, idk what to write anymore!!

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